fox and the girl

FOX  AND THE GIRL

Monday 18 May

It was a dark and stormy night the wind howled like a fox.A week or two ago I stole a chicken.Then the fox's ears pricked up and he heard an angry girl rustling through the bushes ahead  she was looking straight at the fox the girl dived at the fox. The fox looked slim and tired the girl felt sorry and released the tight grip around his neck.the fox was so scared it nearly ran into a tree.There was silence the snow started to fall the girl fell to the ground.Suddenly something warm and fluffy wrapped around her she opened her eyes she saw the fox.In the morning the fox slipped away after he heard the calling of the little girls name. The fox felt proud after he helped the little girl.He thought he would see her again but that day hasn't come yet. so he is planning to get another chicken so that she might come looking for me after all.

THE END {:)

NSL:make sure 1st/3rd person matches

      : add important detail eg snow