Friday 26 June 2015

The Random Friday writing

The casual Sunday frost  


The White glistening snow was defrosting on the the ground like and ice cream melting in the sun heat the sun shone through the walking trees hoping that it would defrost in time for soccer always has this problem on a Sunday morning they wont let us play because when you stand on the grass it dies and wont look as good as a it normally is when i looked through the window i saw some defrosted patches n the ground now i called my mates over you could see a perfect picture of the sun coming through the trees then we looked at the grass most of it had defrosted now instead of paper white grass there is green grass as soon it was fully defrosted i realized i was the only one there then the sun went down i had been here all day it must have been the biggest frost i have ever seen i thought

Suddenly icicle appeared from no were i was getting cold it was getting dark i sprinted  home and told mum all about it then everything went white i knew that a knew frost has started i went out side a snow flake landed on my nose i caught two in my mouth i was about to lick an icicle when mum called my in to stoke the fire you could tell it was cold because the coal went white and stuck together like super glue except it finally melted it  was time to go to bed to see tomorrows new frost

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1 comment:

  1. Hi Emma
    Lovely story, I really like the details.
    From Mum

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